Well I wrote a song named ''VIEJAS MELODIAS'' ( old melodies ) in spanish obvious, and I was thinking of Karen, of course, but I tried to translate it so read it and tell me you opinion, I think it sounds better in spanish though....I love the melody is a pity that you can't hear it!!!

Old melodies
Old melodies they sing
When the world was right
When the world was sincere
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
Who with sadness sang from the heart
But as everything, it also died
And the world has turned cold and gray, cold and gray
Voice from the stars come back again
I haven't stopped of missing you
Many years ago you shined
And suddenly you extinguish
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
What a sad voice who felt pain
Who didn't see beyond the mirror
That now isn't here, come to me, come to me
Old melodies
Today I'm going to sing again
Just to keep alive
The voice that made me fly

Renata, your lyric is really touching. I write this with tears in my eyes.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
You write songs! You are a very talented person!!

Sakura

Thank you Sakura

That is very beautiful Renata! Quite loverly indeed. You're very talented!

Renata,

That was absolutely beautiful! You wrote a beautiful piece!! Wish I could hear yu sing it. Keep writing and singing Renata!

Jayne

Renata,that was beautiful,really!!! You're my idol,remember?

oh you're so sweet!

Renata--
That was SO lovely. I had no idea you were so talented! Keep it up....if for anything--yourself!....(I would, though, sometime like to hear the Spanish version.).....Just keeping on writing.....With that kind of talent, no telling what ELSE you might come up with!

David

Wow, Renata, that was lovely! You have so many talents, girl!

Hello renata... I have to say that it was SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL... you really have a gift... congratulations... it was very touching...
Greetings from spain

DANIEL

Gracias Daniel!

wonderful!

@danielspain21
your avatar makes me cry.. dunno why.. maybe bc karen looks so sad on it...
but I've no idea why... its also wonderful...touching...