Prose Poem I Wrote For A Homework
CarpsButtonFan
29 Aug 2007
Well, my literature teacher told us to write a prose poem..and well a night before I started to think what I shoukld write about and this came to my head (english and spanish version). My folks at school liked it...if you like it...good and if you do not like it...I'm the worst writer around the world 
. Ok, here I go:
English
During the time you stayed with us you were very beloved; not only for the ones who had the luck of surrounded you, but for those anonym people that day to day supported you and perhaps you did not realized it.
There was never someone like you. You were the one who moved many people’s life and even though time has gone by you’re still there. How? Through the legacy you left us, for that reason once is enough for falling in love with your voice.
However, we’ll never understand how someone with a sweet sweet smile like yours, who was able to resuscitate a moribund or that angel look, could think any time that she was not beautiful.
Karen, you live in the hearts of the fans that love your music, nobody can be compared with you. You were unique and you’ll keep being the only one. The affection we feel for you won’t finish at no time.
Karen, I just wish to had been born before in order to meet you, see you, heard you, nevertheless , I still have the hope of looking at you as an angel more singing for the best chorus that has existed: “The Celestial Chorus”.
Spanish
Durante el tiempo que estuviste con nosotros fuiste muy querida; no sólo por los que tuvieron la oportunidad de rodearte, sino por aquellas personas anónimas las cuales día a día te apoyaban sin que tú te dieras cuenta.
Nunca hubo alguien como tú. Eras la que movía la vida de la gente y a pesar del tiempo sigues ahí presente. ¿Cómo? A través del legado que nos dejaste, es por eso que sólo basta con oírte una vez para enamorarse de tu voz.
Sin embargo, jamás entenderemos como alguien con una dulce, dulce sonrisa, capaz de resucitar a un moribundo con una mirada de ángel que aún cautiva pudo alguna vez pensar que no era linda.
Karen, tú vives en los corazones de los fanáticos que admiran tu música, nadie podrá compararse contigo. Fuiste única y lo seguirás siendo. El cariño que por tí sentimos no acabará jamás.
Karen Anne Carpenter, sólo quisiera haber nacido antes para poder conocerte, verte, escucharte, no obstante aún no pierdo la esperanza de mirarte como un ángel más cantando en el mejor coro existente: “El coro celestial”
. Ok, here I go:English
During the time you stayed with us you were very beloved; not only for the ones who had the luck of surrounded you, but for those anonym people that day to day supported you and perhaps you did not realized it.
There was never someone like you. You were the one who moved many people’s life and even though time has gone by you’re still there. How? Through the legacy you left us, for that reason once is enough for falling in love with your voice.
However, we’ll never understand how someone with a sweet sweet smile like yours, who was able to resuscitate a moribund or that angel look, could think any time that she was not beautiful.
Karen, you live in the hearts of the fans that love your music, nobody can be compared with you. You were unique and you’ll keep being the only one. The affection we feel for you won’t finish at no time.
Karen, I just wish to had been born before in order to meet you, see you, heard you, nevertheless , I still have the hope of looking at you as an angel more singing for the best chorus that has existed: “The Celestial Chorus”.
Spanish
Durante el tiempo que estuviste con nosotros fuiste muy querida; no sólo por los que tuvieron la oportunidad de rodearte, sino por aquellas personas anónimas las cuales día a día te apoyaban sin que tú te dieras cuenta.
Nunca hubo alguien como tú. Eras la que movía la vida de la gente y a pesar del tiempo sigues ahí presente. ¿Cómo? A través del legado que nos dejaste, es por eso que sólo basta con oírte una vez para enamorarse de tu voz.
Sin embargo, jamás entenderemos como alguien con una dulce, dulce sonrisa, capaz de resucitar a un moribundo con una mirada de ángel que aún cautiva pudo alguna vez pensar que no era linda.
Karen, tú vives en los corazones de los fanáticos que admiran tu música, nadie podrá compararse contigo. Fuiste única y lo seguirás siendo. El cariño que por tí sentimos no acabará jamás.
Karen Anne Carpenter, sólo quisiera haber nacido antes para poder conocerte, verte, escucharte, no obstante aún no pierdo la esperanza de mirarte como un ángel más cantando en el mejor coro existente: “El coro celestial”
Goofus
29 Aug 2007
QUOTE(Makrpinfetje @ Aug 29 2007, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, my literature teacher told us to write a prose poem..and well a night before I started to think what I shoukld write about and this came to my head (english and spanish version). My folks at school liked it...if you like it...good and if you do not like it...I'm the worst writer around the world . Ok, here I go:
English
During the time you stayed with us you were very beloved; not only for the ones who had the luck of surrounded you, but for those anonym people that day to day supported you and perhaps you did not realized it.
There was never someone like you. You were the one who moved many people's life and even though time has gone by you're still there. How? Through the legacy you left us, for that reason once is enough for falling in love with your voice.
However, we'll never understand how someone with a sweet sweet smile like yours, who was able to resuscitate a moribund or that angel look, could think any time that she was not beautiful.
Karen, you live in the hearts of the fans that love your music, nobody can be compared with you. You were unique and you'll keep being the only one. The affection we feel for you won't finish at no time.
Karen, I just wish to had been born before in order to meet you, see you, heard you, nevertheless , I still have the hope of looking at you as an angel more singing for the best chorus that has existed: "The Celestial Chorus".
. Ok, here I go:English
During the time you stayed with us you were very beloved; not only for the ones who had the luck of surrounded you, but for those anonym people that day to day supported you and perhaps you did not realized it.
There was never someone like you. You were the one who moved many people's life and even though time has gone by you're still there. How? Through the legacy you left us, for that reason once is enough for falling in love with your voice.
However, we'll never understand how someone with a sweet sweet smile like yours, who was able to resuscitate a moribund or that angel look, could think any time that she was not beautiful.
Karen, you live in the hearts of the fans that love your music, nobody can be compared with you. You were unique and you'll keep being the only one. The affection we feel for you won't finish at no time.
Karen, I just wish to had been born before in order to meet you, see you, heard you, nevertheless , I still have the hope of looking at you as an angel more singing for the best chorus that has existed: "The Celestial Chorus".
This is really a nice one! I like it. But I bolded the sentence that I don't quite understand??
But its a really nice piece of work.
CarpsButtonFan
30 Aug 2007
QUOTE(Marty @ Aug 30 2007, 01:20 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Absolutely beautiful, Mafer! Lies! You're a wonderful writer!
Thank you very much guys.
Moribund is someone who's dying.....For example when I'm sick..I feel moribund
Pookeysmom
30 Aug 2007
WOW.... very nice. Mafer. You're English is better than some people around here. I like it very much....good job. 
Cheryl
You're English is better than some people around here. I like it very much....good job. Cheryl
Interpretations
30 Aug 2007
Fantastic job Mafer! Hope you get/got a good mark for that!
CarpsButtonFan
30 Aug 2007
QUOTE(Simon @ Aug 30 2007, 05:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Fantastic job Mafer! Hope you get/got a good mark for that!
There's a competition of poems and the teacher wants to see who are good writing poems in the class. Everyone says I'm a good writer and that I should be chosen...but...to be honest...I do not want to....I'm only beginning...
Interpretations
04 Sep 2007
I know you can do it! Show everyone and yourself that you can!!!!!!!!!
Renata
05 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Makrpinfetje @ Aug 29 2007, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Spanish
Durante el tiempo que estuviste con nosotros fuiste muy querida; no sólo por los que tuvieron la oportunidad de rodearte, sino por aquellas personas anónimas las cuales día a día te apoyaban sin que tú te dieras cuenta.
Nunca hubo alguien como tú. Eras la que movía la vida de la gente y a pesar del tiempo sigues ahí presente. ¿Cómo? A través del legado que nos dejaste, es por eso que sólo basta con oírte una vez para enamorarse de tu voz.
Sin embargo, jamás entenderemos como alguien con una dulce, dulce sonrisa, capaz de resucitar a un moribundo con una mirada de ángel que aún cautiva pudo alguna vez pensar que no era linda.
Karen, tú vives en los corazones de los fanáticos que admiran tu música, nadie podrá compararse contigo. Fuiste única y lo seguirás siendo. El cariño que por tí sentimos no acabará jamás.
Karen Anne Carpenter, sólo quisiera haber nacido antes para poder conocerte, verte, escucharte, no obstante aún no pierdo la esperanza de mirarte como un ángel más cantando en el mejor coro existente: “El coro celestial”[/color]
Durante el tiempo que estuviste con nosotros fuiste muy querida; no sólo por los que tuvieron la oportunidad de rodearte, sino por aquellas personas anónimas las cuales día a día te apoyaban sin que tú te dieras cuenta.
Nunca hubo alguien como tú. Eras la que movía la vida de la gente y a pesar del tiempo sigues ahí presente. ¿Cómo? A través del legado que nos dejaste, es por eso que sólo basta con oírte una vez para enamorarse de tu voz.
Sin embargo, jamás entenderemos como alguien con una dulce, dulce sonrisa, capaz de resucitar a un moribundo con una mirada de ángel que aún cautiva pudo alguna vez pensar que no era linda.
Karen, tú vives en los corazones de los fanáticos que admiran tu música, nadie podrá compararse contigo. Fuiste única y lo seguirás siendo. El cariño que por tí sentimos no acabará jamás.
Karen Anne Carpenter, sólo quisiera haber nacido antes para poder conocerte, verte, escucharte, no obstante aún no pierdo la esperanza de mirarte como un ángel más cantando en el mejor coro existente: “El coro celestial”[/color]
It's more beautiful in Spanish!!! aaww, I loved this part: Sin embargo, jamás entenderemos como alguien con una dulce, dulce sonrisa, capaz de resucitar a un moribundo con una mirada de ángel que aún cautiva pudo alguna vez pensar que no era linda.
Congrats Mafer!!! You almost made me cry
CarpsButtonFan
05 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Renata @ Sep 5 2007, 05:05 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Congrats Mafer!!! You almost made me cry
Of course, I wrote it in spanish at first
. I can't believe that I almost made soemone cry 
. However, I don't think I want to enter the competition.
Renata
05 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Makrpinfetje @ Sep 5 2007, 03:18 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Of course, I wrote it in spanish at first . I can't believe that I almost made soemone cry .
However, I don't think I want to enter the competition.
. I can't believe that I almost made soemone cry . However, I don't think I want to enter the competition.
why not, you gotta try!
it doesn't matter if you win or not, it's just the experience! 
CarpsButtonFan
11 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Marty @ Sep 11 2007, 06:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Mafer is a poet, a writer, a genius! 
I'm as red as a tomato
. I'm not all that...
Marty
12 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Makrpinfetje @ Sep 11 2007, 10:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm as red as a tomato . I'm not all that...
. I'm not all that...Sure you are, Mafer!
CarpsButtonFan
13 Sep 2007
QUOTE(Marty @ Sep 12 2007, 07:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sure you are, Mafer!
Sorry...but....I can't believe all that
