Old Melodies
Renata
07 Sep 2003
Well I wrote a song named ''VIEJAS MELODIAS'' ( old melodies ) in spanish obvious, and I was thinking of Karen, of course, but I tried to translate it so read it and tell me you opinion, I think it sounds better in spanish though....I love the melody is a pity that you can't hear it!!!
Old melodies
Old melodies they sing
When the world was right
When the world was sincere
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
Who with sadness sang from the heart
But as everything, it also died
And the world has turned cold and gray, cold and gray
Voice from the stars come back again
I haven't stopped of missing you
Many years ago you shined
And suddenly you extinguish
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
What a sad voice who felt pain
Who didn't see beyond the mirror
That now isn't here, come to me, come to me
Old melodies
Today I'm going to sing again
Just to keep alive
The voice that made me fly
Old melodies
Old melodies they sing
When the world was right
When the world was sincere
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
Who with sadness sang from the heart
But as everything, it also died
And the world has turned cold and gray, cold and gray
Voice from the stars come back again
I haven't stopped of missing you
Many years ago you shined
And suddenly you extinguish
There was a voice that filled the soul of love
What a sad voice who felt pain
Who didn't see beyond the mirror
That now isn't here, come to me, come to me
Old melodies
Today I'm going to sing again
Just to keep alive
The voice that made me fly
Sakura
07 Sep 2003
Renata, your lyric is really touching. I write this with tears in my eyes.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
You write songs! You are a very talented person!!
Sakura
Thanks for sharing it with us.
You write songs! You are a very talented person!!
Sakura
JoanieBlueEyes
07 Sep 2003
That is very beautiful Renata! Quite loverly indeed. You're very talented!
whsoxfan
08 Sep 2003
Renata,
That was absolutely beautiful! You wrote a beautiful piece!! Wish I could hear yu sing it. Keep writing and singing Renata!
Jayne
That was absolutely beautiful! You wrote a beautiful piece!! Wish I could hear yu sing it. Keep writing and singing Renata!
Jayne
Guest_Guest_* 10 Sep 2003
Renata--
That was SO lovely. I had no idea you were so talented! Keep it up....if for anything--yourself!....(I would, though, sometime like to hear the Spanish version.).....Just keeping on writing.....With that kind of talent, no telling what ELSE you might come up with!
David
That was SO lovely. I had no idea you were so talented!
Keep it up....if for anything--yourself!....(I would, though, sometime like to hear the Spanish version.).....Just keeping on writing.....With that kind of talent, no telling what ELSE you might come up with!David
daniel1982spain
25 Sep 2003
Hello renata... I have to say that it was SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL... you really have a gift... congratulations... it was very touching... 
Greetings from spain
DANIEL
Greetings from spain
DANIEL
cooling
14 Jan 2006
wonderful!
@danielspain21
your avatar makes me cry.. dunno why.. maybe bc karen looks so sad on it...
but I've no idea why... its also wonderful...touching...
Edited by cooling, 14 January 2006 - 08:28 PM.
@danielspain21
your avatar makes me cry.. dunno why.. maybe bc karen looks so sad on it...
but I've no idea why... its also wonderful...touching...
Edited by cooling, 14 January 2006 - 08:28 PM.
